What do you think of my rap verse?

Just wrote this, its how i feel. So tell me what you think. Thank you

Life is a dream, but mine is a nightmare
Been filled with hatred and despair
As you live without care
It hit me so hard, i couldnt prepare
My mind and heart is under repair
I can no longer bere
Life affair
Leave no survivers to spare
If you wanna enter it, you gotta pay the devil a fair
People say my life is rare
Im so lost, get on my kness to a prayer
Im in a warefare
So i wont stop till i get the chair.